Write a PEEL paragraph responding to this statement
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.
You must:
Decide on your umbrella Point
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS because it is Multimedia. Firstly, Rimu is a multimedia house which means that most of our work is done on computers and that means we can easily find resources to help us learn such as Khan Academy. Secondly, typing is so much faster than writing so Rimu students can finish work faster than mainstream classes, a good example of this would be in the writing sample where most people in Rimu finish fast that people in mainstream. Another point, would be that having computer saves money on books and stationery and example would be that rimu students only need three books where mainstreamed students need six. It's because of these reasons why I think Rimu is the best house.
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